7/25/2007

farewell to the boy wander

Harry Potter, at last, is done.

I didn’t say dead, just done; I finally finished the seventh and final installment in the sprawling wizard-world epic, though readers who don’t want the big ending spoiled for them should probably stop reading now.

Seriously.

Will the rest of you — yes, glad to see that both of you stuck around — please humor me while I pile even more self-indulgent analysis onto an already tottering heap of instant commentary?

I liked the final book but also had many moments when I thought that J.K. Rowling had gone astray, somewhat akin to what I felt when I wrapped up Half-Blood Prince. If book six might have been more accurately titled, Harry Potter and The Tom Riddle Backstory, this one seemed to mainly exist to fill us in on Albus Dumbledore’s murky history, details of which are leaked out at an excruciatingly slow pace while Harry and pals evade the Nazi-like Death Eaters. I was troubled greatly by the author’s decision to break format and abandon the familiar Hogwarts setting for the great majority of the book, instead leaving our heroes most often cold and damp in some forest or another and always on the move. For a second there I thought I’d accidentally picked back up Cormac McCarthy’s The Road:

“We have to get going.”
“Can’t we stay in this forest one more night?”
“No, Ron, you know it’s not safe here.”

“I know. But are we still the good guys?”
“We’re still the good guys. Okay?”

“Okay.”


Okay, so I’m exaggerating a bit, but didn’t all the bleak forest-jumping stuff just wear you out? One review that I’ve read suggested that Rowling intended to thrust her characters into the harsh discomfort of the adult world in this book, and that may be so, but it doesn’t make me like it.
I was also troubled by how little we saw of some of my favorite characters in this book (where the hell was Professor McGonagall until the climatic final battle?) and surprised that I was moved by the death of Dobby, who annoyed the pants off me in previous books. (As an aside, I was also surprised that we never heard more about the veil that killed Sirius in Order of the Phoenix; I thought for sure it would pop up again, or maybe I missed something?)

But those are minor quibbles next to my last point. What editor in her right mind gave a green light to the story structure in place in the final six chapters? True, “The Battle of Hogwarts” manages to be an epic climax — even if I do find Rowland’s fight-scene prose sometimes hard to follow — and better writers than me have compared it to the magnificent clash of armies at the end of Tolkien’s Lord of the Rings. Rowling, however, goes out of her way to interrupt the action of her well-positioned climax with not one but two meandering detours into the misty Mountains of Exposition.
What happened? Couldn’t the long-overdue explanation for Snape’s duplicity have been handled earlier (and less clumsily)? And although I liked the scene at the afterlife King’s Cross Station, I tend to agree with the critics who commented that Rowling was writing herself in circles there.

But I’ll have to say she did it. Rowling pulled the whole thing off with just a few stumbles in the end and she proved with the last book that maybe she had a plan all along. This final installment seemed to go out of its way to revisit many of the major locations, spells, potions and characters from earlier books, not in a manner that felt like desperate recycling but as if to prove to us that Rowling had the whole thing figured out from the very start. I’m curious how well the series would stand up to a second reading, now knowing about Horcruxes and Hallows and who was going to croak in the end.

I’m also curious: What did everyone else think?

5 Comments:

Anonymous Norma (akafrankgreen's friend) said...

I really, really enjoyed this novel. As a pretty big fan of the series, I was thrilled with the way she dodged the whole "Will Harry die?" question by having him both die AND live. Wonderful.

The thing I think I most enjoyed was the way that she AVOIDED the sugar-coating of things. People die immediately, Voldemort attacks directly, etc. Some of it was a bit predictable (Snape's true allegiance, Dumbledore's "Obi Wan Kenobi" return), but satisfying, nonetheless. That's how I felt about the book: it was satisfying, perhaps cathartic, in a way.

And I'm with you: where the hell was McGonagall? I MISSED her!

7/25/2007 5:14 PM  
Blogger Riley said...

I really liked it, except for the characters talking in exposition or wandering in and out of Snape's exposition memories at the end. The epilogue was, I guess, earned, if a little too sweet.

Molly Weasley's duel with Bellatrix Lestrange and the deaths of Hedwig and Dobby were my favorite parts.

7/25/2007 8:08 PM  
Anonymous norma (akafrankgreen's friend) said...

AMEN! Honestly, I CHEERED when Molly Weasley called Bellatrix a bitch and then kicked her ass! Cheered!

7/26/2007 9:24 AM  
Blogger TRAYB said...

Excellent insights from all.

I was shocked to see the word "bitch" in a Harry Potter book, though the situation certainly called for it.

The dead/not dead plot turn was soooo "Buffy" for me, though I also suspected back in book five that Harry might become a sort of Jesus figure in his fight against Voldy.

I think J.K. missed an opportunity there, though, by not letting us mourn his "death" for a chapter or so. In the Narnia books, the kids go through hell after Aslan gets the knife, so his return has real emotional weight to it. Same thing with Buffy. Harry, instead, is immediately shown in the afterlife train station, then plays possum for a chapter. It didn't grip me the way it could've.

7/27/2007 9:37 AM  
Anonymous Joseph said...

Well, I think I finished on the very same day, Tray, and thought many of the same things you did. I was moved by Percy's return and prud of J.K. as well for being realistic about much of the emotion.

I wasn't so surprised by the change from the normal Hogwarts backdrop. I kind of expected it based on the end of the last one.

All in all, a fast paced page turner, that ended, for me, in a way that felt like we had plenty of closure.

Oh, and I missed McGonagall too (but LOVED when she called the suits of armor to life, that was a cool scene that I could just totally picture). And Dobby's funeral was so tocuhing as well (which I found myself surprised at feeling, considering he drove me crazy as well!). Wish we still had our book club, we could totally talk about this one for long into the evening! - Joseph

7/27/2007 8:46 PM  

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